New characters for our final piece

Looking at the feedback and now the new storyboard me and Ian have made a close decision to change the cast abit we are keeping the same characters "Smig rogers" and also "Ricky" and "Thompson" its just they need spicing up a bit.
When we were thinking and looking back on the draft of the film we found the character to sarcastic that it didn't make them look or show an intimidating side to them, but the people like the acting and accents.
So looking at our characters this is what we came up with:

Smig:

• Needs a hat - the reason why we need a hat for this character is because it hides his identify as a role model of a character, with smig having red it was good in a way of having the over the top factor but me an Ian wanted a character that only come out of the dark and is very anonymous and we wanted to show the best possibility of the this, so using the hat it will cover the red hair and bring out a more thuggish type of character and change the appearance dramatically.
  

It will bring out this kind of effect in smig and I think make him look more overpowering and the actor has the right outline of body posture after people has said from watching the movie and also the teachers.
I think the clothes are still perfect for this characters maybe try and get a leather jacket though and the glasses are to over the top again and doesn't bond with the new character in stock.

• Accent - It just needs to be a bit more louder and clearer and change the accent to a more kind of strong affect to show off his character intimidation. Also some of the line are too cocky and sound very cheesy so we need to take that into consideration next time as well.
  

Ricky - Ricky is a perfect character but we need him to be more arragessive in his body language like in the storyboard we need close up's of him banging the table or grabbing smig and threating him every time he trys annoy him and keeps nagging him in a stong voice and the eye contact in the draft is perfect as well.

Thomson - He needs to be a lot more argrssive and a mean and clever tough nut which is what we got in stock for our next film, i think the clothes in the last one is more better it just we had the same actor for it so we need a new one so someone who is tall and has a sharp face and strong jesture in body language and size. He going to be like an evil twin to smig and he WANTS this breifcase.

The character should look like this -











So with this new cast is makes the film more hard hitting and sharper in its acting and enviroment of the opening and shows off the film from the very start, more impact and dramatic which will hopefully gives us more marks =).