Script for final Smig:
Scene 1- Sound of music being played throughout the scene and sudden flashbacks of events of key symbols, ricky slams the chair and starts the interview.
(Shots 1-23)
Ricky: I asked for a answer Smig not for you to just daydream all day.
Smig: ohhhh...... sorry i'll get on my knees and beg for you not to arrest me
Ricky: (grabs smig) I didn't come here for jokes smig i came for a bloody answer
Smig: So you did ricky ... so you did.... well ... i'll tell yeah, it was a lovely summers day bird in sky and a jolly old postman on the bike
Ricky: SMIG! ...... You you not understand or do you need a new brain cell from the smack to your head
Smig: Nahhh no need for that
Ricky: Well smig .... enlighten me!
Smig: Fine ........ I was working as an undercover Warwick way when one of my companions came and handed over a briefcase
Scene 2- Running of briefcase - person runs and hand the briefcase over, skips back to smig talking about it, flashes back into smig looking into the briefcase and a facial expression shows off how important whatever in their is.
shot 23- 34
Rod: Running towards smig shouting and panic on face - SMIG ........ SMIG!
Smig: You're late again rod
Rod: I no I'm sorry, them dam agents where on to me had to ditch them.
Smig: Dam bastards
Rod: Never mind that the briefcase ....... take care of it important information from the team, smig whatever you do .... DON'T MESS IT UP
Smig: You got my word and so does the others
(Back into room of smig)
Smig: Sooo after that part of chapter 1 i had a slight idea of opening the big bugger
(Back to outside smig looks in briefcase facial expression shows how important this is)
Scene 3- Thomspon enters and wants the breifcase but smig will not hand it over
Shots 34-41
Thomspon: OI!!
Smig: As turning round - what rod (as saying smack to the face)
Thompson: It's your new lover
Smig: Not my type
Thomspon: Nahhh not mine either but that briefcase down there looks fancie.
Fightscene - shot 45 - smig - well do you fancie the bitch of me that goes with it?
Shot: 46 - Yeah i like a bit of competition actually (smack briefcase round smig head as he falls to floor helplessly)
Back in room-Smig (smacks his fist) POW...... i hit the floor.... just like that ...... was just a black blur to me expect from that bastard walking away with my life in my hands in that bastards
Scene 4 - Thompson takes breifcase and leaves while smig is thier for the police undercover to arrest him: shot 46-63
Close up of smig waking up and thompson picking up breifcase.
Thomspon: The thing is smig the bitch is always on the lead (flicks tho cop running as resemblement)
Sudden click or gun pointed of cop
Undercover cop: you are understand arrest of suspected murder within holdment of an bomb in a briefcase.
Smig: I'll fucking kill you tom i fucking will!
(Back to room) smig repeats line in more calm voice.
Ricky: Well sounds believable looks like something is working in worthless mind.
Smig: True story take it or leave it
Ricky: Yeah something you should of done with the briefcase smig
Smig: Ricky could you pass me the pen for a minute i wanna plead guilty for this
(as ricky get pen smig slams head down on table and takes his gun and hold gun point)
Smig: Rule one ricky never trust me ...... and rule two i take your advice and take the briefcase
(smack gun on head and ricky remain unconscious)
Smig: Holds type - I'm smig and i want my briefcase back
Slams type and break and walks out.
With this scirpt we are now happy with, it more clear and understanding and cocky resemblements of important links.
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